My first few haikus

So I figured I should finally try my hand at this marvel that is the Haiku poem
Following just the bare guidelines of 3 lines with 5-7-5 syllables here is what i got

Haiku 1

Wedding dress hangs there
Seven days till the big day
Nerves creating havoc

Haiku 2

Sun is not shining
Eyelids won’t open, feeling heavy.
Bedtime has arrived

Haiku 3

Blue sky, sun is out.
Chilly winds, cold hands, cold nose;
Winter approaching

Now be dreadfully honest

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3 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ally
    Oct 01, 2008 @ 10:05:00

    Hiya Line,

    I really like the 2 and 3. I think if you change 1 around to

    Nerves creating havoc
    Seven days to the big day
    Perfect wedding dress

    it works better. It’s just ‘hangs there’ seems to conjure really ominous images!

    Reply

  2. Mysterystitcher
    Jul 16, 2010 @ 12:26:40

    Oh I like your style so much. I hope your Big Day will be okay.

    Reply

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